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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Why? YOu were so sweet, you acted so innocent. Then darren left my life, and you followed. YOu found out i liked you, and you started acting different. like i was diseased. You wanted nothing to do with me. Why? What was it i did? Was it too obvious i liked you? WAs it not obvious enough? I just dont get it! The night before you left, you were so sweet to me. you gave me hugs, you actually said more than three words to me! But then you got back. Everything was different. I dont know what i did but it must have been bad. You hurt me, you cut me deeper than any knife could. but whats done is done, and there is nothing you can do to change that now! |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I agree....sometimes it's just too late to do anything. Very emototional write.  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Nice write, I would be so sad if that happened to me. but you really can't do anything about it now, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
A rant! yay I love rants! Very nicely done and well put together. I enjoyed the questioning atmosphere that you held throughout the piece and you displayed your emotions well. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
I had a similar poem with the same title. It was about a guy in my life. It seems like they always leave us wondering..."why". Great write, i really liked it. |
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