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Teen Poetry #7

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adbdesperado18
Junior Member

since 2003-11-30

Posts 33

0 posted 2003-12-16 06:06 PM

Arose,
Absorbed world,
Then
Myself,
Questioning,
The person
I morphed to,

What fostered in me?
Lying,
Hiding,
Secluding,
Depression.

Goodness,
Lost among
All cruelty,
Of world,
Friends,
Peers.

Distant now,
Desiring, only
Solitude.

Sucked,
Into nothingness,
Diminishing,
Fading away,
Merely a memory,
Almost,
A phantom.

Searching deep,
Leave
Chaos?
I suppose,
An answer,
Unknown.

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Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-12-16 06:23 PM

This poem I found confusing in the start but once I got used to the style I enjoyed it

-ash

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2003-12-17 01:07 PM

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~Jewel

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