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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
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0 posted 2003-12-03 11:31 PM



Were you the diffrent kid?
did they laugh at what you did?
did you not have money?
and did your colths look funny?
did you bottle it up inside?
to brave to blush
yet doomed to hide?
did your feelings fall away
did your walls grow and darken
did you laugh back at them?
did you sink did you swim?
I was the diffrent kid
in the hall they laughed at what I did
Stoic my feelings to well hid
I was indeed the diffrent kid
lashing out against the walls
although I built them dark and tall
to brave to blush
and doomed to hide.
Oh so diffrent what lurks inside.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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wishing on a star
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)
1 posted 2003-12-04 08:00 AM


i know how that is ofr sure!! nice post!!!
           ~*Me~*

young naive & vulnerable to the world

duncan idaho
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since 2003-11-14
Posts 70
dune
2 posted 2003-12-04 02:30 PM


sniff sniff...
POETIC BRILLIANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can I be your publisher?

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
3 posted 2003-12-04 07:13 PM


I really liked this, it flowed really well, and was so true to many people because there is always a "different kid", and it's really sad how they are tormented because of who they are.

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

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