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Providence |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Hey all, wrote this in a wierd mood. Hope you like. Providence Between their fingers the veil is torn these two sisters guides to the forlorn one is fair and of the light the other mysterious and loves the night two in one and one in two together they sit, watch, and view from the beginning to the end all must pass, that they portend for the light the first is kind but like justice she is blind and good may fall while evil flies underneath the darkening skies in the night the second will grow deaf and dumb and so bestow perilous fruit to those on high for those below to meek by Kind Destiny and Perilous Fate never hold their hands or abate for one is two and two now one together they won't be undone. I'd really like to hear what you think about this. Thnx in advance IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
two in one and one in two together they sit, watch, and view from the beginning to the end all must pass, that they portend This is a very inspired write... You should be in a wierd mood more often. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
i'm lovin' your weird moods already. keep em' comin' sha sha |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Glad to see you back.  I'm not sure I understand the concept of 'justice'. I can see where the bestowing (not sure if that's the right word) of justice is blind, but justice itself? hrm... keep posting. I'll keep an eye out for your poetry. -Leah |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
"one in two and two in one," oh those were the days. ohh to be that way again. good onnnnnneeeeeee. |
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