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synthetic Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 70ontario, canada |
Women feeling insecure 'bout their minds, bodies and faces the media stands like the Nazis, and them multiple Jew races. By saying that does it make me racist? Because I'm a poet behind an alias does that make me faceless? I believe every religion has an element of truth, would that mean my beliefs are misconstrued? Who's right who's wrong, who stands to be correct? And if so how long will that good be in effect? Cuz life is full of changes, high and lows switching places, and evil like the Thriller Man keeps switching faces. Man I don't really know one single thing, except that I don't really know one single thing. I need a library of universal truths, and unlike the corporate world to be put to good use. Would you believe that affirmative action was so that as they keep scheming blacks keep relaxing? I hope you know equal rights between men and women is never gonna happen, you'll only get superficial roles handing out royal sanctions. Try and ask for a famous women's name they'll be like who's asking. Unless of course it's a media celebrity like Paris Hilton, Jada or another from the hills of Beverly. Knock knock, who's there? Pamela's pair of gigantic boobies ya I did touch 'em sue me! The world is seriously in grave peril, we live our lives trying to make due for our next bill. Kids trying to learn thinking about buying houses and cars, how many sons, how many daughters, a cat or a dog. You need to slow 'em down, give 'em direction, strip away the word perfection, and stamp down be the best you can be. Forget about outter critics, what do I think about me. The American government's a horrible joke, can't help but look at Bush and ask yourself what else did he smoke? The war in the Middle East is never gonna end until war ceises to stand as profitable means to an end. We've watched the lives of so many innocent end, yet instead of advertising peace and share, tv's saying spend spend spend. Man I'm so damn sick of this world, makes me wanna drink til' my head spins and my pains fade in twirls. Oh God, if you exist please help me the corruption in this world is making me unhealthy. Send me a saviour. |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
WOW!!! I believe in God and what the Bible says.. and yes. I have thought about these things too.. I love the whole thing.. It really makes a person think and the title just gives it a little extra. Great job.. this is something that's really hard to post bc you're scared of what people will say.. but I am glad you had the courage to stand up for what you believe in.. out of the whole poem. I had one (1) favorite line.. "Who's right who's wrong, who stands to be correct?" it just kinda outstates the whole poem and like sums it up all in one line.. fantastic job.. I hope you get more post on this one.. since i'm going to *bump* it back up to the top maybe you will ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Who's right who's wrong, who stands to be correct? And if so how long will that good be in effect? wow that was so unbelivable i liked this..... i don't know what else to say... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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mad_about_you New Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 2 |
awesome poem..thats all i'm gonna say. it talks about too many different interesting aspects to pick it apart. Very interesting and covered alot of ground..also very daring to put it up here..good job  |
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