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Teen Poetry #7

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Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-08-11 11:04 PM

Too much drama
In school these days
The depressed are cool
Or so they portray

Why should you be suicidal
Just because you think its cool
And if your not the center of attention
That your just another tool

Slit your wrist and cry for hours
Just to get pathetic sympathy
Why dont you see
What it seams to be

Whats wrong with you
Get a clue
Forget about your suicide
Go out there and just live life

Dont worry about the pressure
It wont ever go away
But its not worth
Ending your life today

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

1 posted 2006-08-11 11:42 PM

AMEN!

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

2 posted 2006-08-12 12:36 PM

Great poem! I can realate to that very much!!!!!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-08-12 01:27 PM

Hey Tempest!

I love your msg in this poem, it's awesome to see someone writing like this. I've never told you this before but in almost all of your poems you have a msg that I appreciate and enjoy reading. I hope you keep up the good work with these poems!

Until then I'll be waiting to read more

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-08-12 03:40 PM

Dont worry about the pressure
It wont ever go away
But its not worth
Ending your life today.

this was my favorite part of the poem although the rest was amazing too.this was an awesome poem and i agree with stargal i liked the message it gave out...
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

I'mAround
New Member

since 2006-08-08

Posts 3
England

5 posted 2006-08-13 11:15 AM

That was a seriously beautiful poem... And I think you said what so many people have been thinking for so long.

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

6 posted 2006-08-15 10:59 AM

Thanks Im Around your my new best friend,jk, but thanks for the comment.
~tempest~

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