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Falling for you |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
this is two differnt poems but they were both written in the same frame of mind. i needed to post together. theres one than a divede, than the other. sorry its long. ~~~~ these are written about a boy i liked, and my best friend who betrayed me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ don't mess with me,or you will pay try to use me,i won't take it kindly don't even think bout it, wanna see another day you try and flatter,say I am so fine but you've forgotten,or you don't care that you once used me I won't ever forgive you,that is sure how vulnerable then, now you dont know how mad i can be you laughed when I fell,said i had no future when we first met , you were such a good friend but you still manged to hurt me in the worst ways before I was told about your past, you were a godsend humiliated me,scarred for all of my days i trusted you with my secrets, and my crush i stil remember that day when you went at my back the pain and hurt still come back in a rush YOU didnt even tell me, thats what made me so mad i couldn't belive what you did never thought that you could have gone that low that you would tell such fibs while you flirted with hin,you made sure i didnt know now apart of my heart has forgiven you while part of my pride will never forget what you never told me,the things you knew words YOU didn't tell me,what i found you meant ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the capilization of you is about the fact it wasnt even her who told me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I used to think that you were so sweet and so nice joked with me and you led me on your best friend asked me out,still it was you liked until that dance i thought hope,was gone then there was that first dance a slow song, i looked into your eyes it was then,thought we might have a chance didn't see through it,all those lies you held me close , staring at my face i looked at you,wanting this so much it seemed perfect,your arm round my waist i realized that i had fallen in love your head bent forward meeting mine sparks flew between us as we kissed i swear stood still, all of time in that monent,only we existed all becase of that kiss i wanted you i knew,wanted more of this when we were together so new i gave you my heart,when we went out took to long to find out whats real i wasnt smart enough to doubt with your harm holding me,could only feel most times made me laugh,at times made me cry you taught me lessons, ones about life when we were with your friends,you wanted me shy alone toghether though we would often fight at first i woudnt change a thing but afterwhile, you made me to upset so it became a strain,an aching you made promises, but then you'd forget then i began to notice, you started to act weird around her going though little fits me watching her stare back,torture it was the last dance of the year you kissed me, then you stepped outside i thought it was pretty queer i wondered what you might have to hide you had kept acting as if something was wrong i asked you ,you ignored me with a kiss then walked off, just before our special song i didnt get, what had i done to get you ticked i stepped outside the door, and saw you and my friend, i ran out at you,questions in my eyes how could you have,now i knew your flaw she looked at me in sorrow,i spit,uncaring you had told her lies ringing in my ears, no end to your spite,fallen to your charm she looked at me all cruel, and she kissed you you returned it, all i saw was her instead of me in your arms neither of you seemed to have any clue that i was there still,i slapped her,and on you i spit you had betrayed me, going together i wanted to break you even though it was her that i hit but here you are back again,seeming better you said you want me back, though you two are still a couple she wants me to forgive her and trust her,which never will i do you had me then, and you dropped me, that was your fumble i do feel kind of sorry for her, I mean after all she fell for You ~~~ its long i know i am sorry, bear with me. just let me know what you think. i wrote the first one then this part just came along. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i do feel kind of sorry for her, I mean after all she fell for You. i liked this line it means a lot i liked your poem.....the second part was my favorite though......i'm sorry for what they did to you... i hope you feel better. hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
it was over a year ago, but something the other day kinda brought it up |
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kit kat New Member
since 2006-08-09
Posts 2arizona usa |
wow im sorry i know how it feels |
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