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broken627
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-27 06:57 PM


I didnt realize what this would do to me
I didnt think u couldtake complete control over me
so everything u said it was all lies
all those things about how you said you loved my eyes
I must admit you wear quite the disguise
why did i care and why did i call
i shouldnt have botherd thinking ud answer
i never got any replies before
you dont want me anymore
i dont know if you ever did
you were the only thing that kept me going
i didnt realize what you were doing
your were my happiness
and with you gone its gone
months later andyour still my number one
i guess i should move on find someone new
but i already did that they didnt even compare to you
so where do i go
without you time goes by so slow
these tears are to much i cant stop their flow..
please come back to me i miss you so
all this pain ill never let you know

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mysticangel001
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 7

1 posted 2003-11-27 08:10 PM


that was great! i feel what u feel. i have had the same thing happen or felt the same thing. keep ritein. LOVE IT!!

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-11-27 08:42 PM


I agree with your last reply. I feel the same way too. I guess when they say time heals wounds...they mean a LONG time because it's not short. Thanks for the read, it really hit home! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

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