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your little world
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your little world |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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yet another song/poem. enjoy Your little world You stare across the room, you're dead to everything but him the silence spells my doom i cant even hear whats wrong with you keep the tears alone hidden away from your view be strong like a stone that what everyone tells me now i stand outside your house the light is shining out your window i will be here till you come to me from inside your little world you scream of all the years all the times when we were young in spirit events are building up your fears but its ok, at least youve got him these days will always drag on you only talk about your concern for him i confess my love not gone you ignore it, make me cry on the inside the pain is left inside my ears the words still ring so true anthems of all my love playing out words bring me fresh tears but my world is so alone so i stand outside your house the rain is streaming down you window i will die here till you come from inside your little world the night is here to stay i realize this out your window i guess ill see you as you walk away from inside my little world |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
awwww...this was somewhat a sad reading, hope to hear more >>be blessed |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well written, keep on keepin' on  |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
little....window....good onnnnnneeeeeeeeeee. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Kool. I liked it, it was sad, but good! keep on writing!!! ~kissa~ |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
the end was great. I truely enjoyed this. nicely crafted. |
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