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Now and then |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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On a pedestal, higher than any before, I ‘ve placed you in the past, You lived among clouds, and rose among stars, Smile and kisses of yours were of heaven’s gift, A hug from your heart was a smile from God, To be in your company was a glimpse of heaven, All that was but a few months ago, I’ve opened my eyes to see who you really are, Even when you stood above me, you are lower than any I’ve know, Your kisses are not filled with delight, and in your smile, I sense the devil grin, Full of lust you are when you hug me, and so cold I feel as you hold me tight, Being next to you, I feel even more alone, for I’ve abandon the real me tonight. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
BRAVO.. I loved this.. I have do admit. I don't read much of your writing.. (not because you can't write) but because.. I just usually don't relate to your poetry.. but this was great.. I loved it.. wonderful.. the ending was perfect.. keep it up.. ~heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Omgosh! I enjoyed reading this poem a lot. Yet it also made me kind of sad... That is a good thing though, right? It means that I felt the emotions in this poem, at least i think i did... lol Great write, this one also has to be one of my favorites by you  @-->--- |
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