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Ally Stone
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0 posted 2003-11-15 09:44 PM


Absence of necessity brings hate
and fear.
I fight the urge to despise you,
Yet slowly feel my demons caving in.
I have made you, out of memory and vapor;
Spent hours tending to the thought of you,
Pruning my mind, preparing for rendezvous.
But in this hollow, empty room,
I understand that I created only to destroy.
Something that was real once, I have inflated into
an immortal.
And when I needed a God to cradle me,
You proved to be but the human you are.
There is no logic in blaming you,
Only easiness.
Because I stand now in an empty room,
Satisfied and made ever more hungry,
by the memory of how you made it crowded.


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1 posted 2003-11-15 10:58 PM


Interesting....

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

dertah
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2 posted 2003-11-16 12:55 PM


eerrrrrrrrrrr.....(hatred grits his teeth)
Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2003-11-17 06:54 AM


Wow...I liked this...especially the last two sentences...Nice job.

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

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