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December Song (2...reposted....finished.)
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December Song (2...reposted....finished.) |
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smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
this is unfinished...i'll post the rest when i'm finished ... i was at home this weekend and i was playing the piano (though i dont know how to play very much...just some chords) and i wrote this at about 3 in the morning...in my opinion it is just beautiful on the piano with the vocals and everything....maybe it's kind of weak but i nearly cried writing it. haha. enjoy December Song Breathing in, the air is cold and i'm feeling so alone... without you, I can't move... paralyzed by the truth of living without you. Mist is falling from the air like tiny snowflakes in your hair the sun is gone and winter is here and in the dark your standing right there. in front of me...i just can't reach and i can't carry my heart that far Across the mile...to see you smile... and i just can't wait for December. The red-orange glow you used to love has faded away and jaded our love... you're so high...you can't see me i'm so low...i'm beneath me December was always our song... you were there but LOVE WAS ALWAYS GONE January came and made me bitter but Fall has fallen and now i remember you... in front of me...i couldn't reach and i can't burry all my favorite scars think back a while and try to see you cry... and now i just can't wait for December Remember walking in the snow, it's not that long ago November is halfway through, I'm drowning in the thoughts of you i wrote you that november song i would play and you never sang along Summer is falling and spring is calling you away... yesterday ..... is December. finished...completed....done |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
If this were on a CD, I'd go out and buy it! I love it, really.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
definately agree with that!! this was AWESOME! I'd have to say one of the best I have read on here, and this site is full of talent. Great job  |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
oh i think you got it oh i think you got it. ohhhhohhhohh |
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smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
thanks a lot...if i can somehow manage to maek a decent recording of this on the piano i'll put it online for download.....thanks "if you want me back...you're gonna have to ask." |
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