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Teen Poetry #7

III. Wisps In Time

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-11-08 08:49 PM

III.

So what happens now?
   Do i continue this charade
pretending that the hollowness i feel
    is a figment    of my imagination
convincing myself      being able to share
   treasured moments of stolen time
with you              is worth it.
   The faith is hard to keep though
Wilting in the heat
  begging the sky    for the sweet taste    of life
  The love runs deep though
electrifying even the farthest reaches of my being
       Invigorating!
The pain is too real though
   leaving the fingertips of my heart    outstretched
          teased by the missing piece
that is nothing more    than a wisp
             in time.
* Greetings all, if you made it this far i'm hoping that you read the other two pieces that go with this one and i'd love to hear what you thought about the whole thing overall.
thanks much
   - mike

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

[This message has been edited by Kaos (11-08-2005 11:40 PM).]

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