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Teen Poetry #7

So cast me into the night

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2005-11-07 07:21 PM

You were once the one
to make my world so bright
the who kissed away all of the tears
that I dared to show
and now you have left me
and it is dark and cold
So cast me in to the night
for my darling the sun has gone
the world has turned it's back
cast me very gently and watch for the pieces
I will pick them up and put them together
eventually with only one more piece
that's gone missing
but do not fear I will forget you
after a while in my night.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2005-11-07 07:51 PM

i felt this one. So many times have i seen this happen to people close to me... good write

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

2 posted 2005-11-22 08:34 PM

Thanks. Unfortunatly this has happened. Actually quite recently I might add. But writing about it does help.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

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