Teen Poetry #7 |
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well kept reality |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
mascara runs with a bitter smile as she roams a lonely isle rainy thoughts flood her mind sweet temptation one of a kind thoughts flow free yet kept inside in this reality her soul has died dont talk dont sleep dont eat just keep it all bottled in show them all be tough dont let them see you fall 3 I ask why, but in my mind, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can really relate to this...really... ![]() |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Exactly!! Sometimes this kind of stuff hurts.. |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
I've been there. You conveyed the emotion very well. You play the song I know. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
I loved it- it's going into my library. It's just one of those that reaches right to the core and pulls. Should "free" be "freely?" Thanks for sharing. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
yeah pretty much everyone has been here, but you words still make it a poignant piece. overall i liked it. bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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