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Teen Poetry #7

Conviction

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

0 posted 2003-11-05 06:24 PM

I know I haven't posted anything in a while... but I guess you could say I'm back. I want your honest oppinion on this one imparticular. It's my most recent, I had a case of writers block for a while.

People, People, People
Killing, Killing, Killing
Dying, Dying
Dead
My tears are not
Of happiness or joy
But of anger and pain
Hate and violence
The purpose of
Misconstrued love
Fairy tales
Hopeless, Hopeless
Empty
Go, Go, Go away
Quit haunting me with conviction.

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-11-05 07:32 PM

I really liked it.. the rhythym was really good. I especially liked "dying dying dead"
it just flowed so well. Thanks for sharing

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-06 12:45 PM

conviction..........

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