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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2005-04-25 10:32 AM


row 15 seat 1a

can you hear my eyes muttering?
their language is indistinguishable from
a child's grumble.
when can a smile return to the face of the undeserving?
if i hang upside down from the mezzanine
my tears could flow in reverse -a blasphemy to hard times-
and this stupor may begin to fade out.
the edges close in as my focus slows,
there is one image ahead but it is so obscurred by my
failed applause. i have the most disgraceful worship.
still you lift my head and pattern your tears to mine.
true sympathy.

© Copyright 2005 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2005-04-27 04:46 PM


hmmm.
I'm bored.
you can do better.
my name is also harsh.

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
2 posted 2005-04-27 05:10 PM


agreed. this sucks.
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