The Violins Weep For Appluase

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Teen Poetry #7

The Violins Weep For Appluase

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2005-04-13 10:07 AM

The Violins Weep For Appluase

Your inner child draws fire
on already buried veins.
Leave all your attachments at home
with you ten pack of crayons
and crying.
What's that you say? You're tone deaf too?
How conventient.
I'm indifferent to you and all your scars of
that look like old ashes, but then again
I'm color blind too.

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

1 posted 2005-04-13 02:39 PM

You have a very unique and different style, I like the way you write! Keep it up.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2005-04-13 05:01 PM

damn!
that's gotta be the best.
at least today.
I love the...sarcasm I guess you'd call it.
but not quite.
mocking tone...
wow! skill!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2005-04-13 05:39 PM

thank you both. i'm glad that you caught that my wry tone in this. it's an interesting way of looking at a dark subject.

drummerboy678
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 134

4 posted 2005-04-14 11:59 PM

to quote Lexy:

damn...

seriously man, blown away...

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2005-04-15 01:40 AM

thanks drummer

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

6 posted 2005-04-16 11:15 PM

This was awesome! Your writing is unique, nothing like I've ever read before. This is something I normally wouldn't like but I LOVE this! It's just your unique way! Good work! ~Jess

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

7 posted 2005-04-17 09:11 PM

thank you, i try to be different. too many try to be someone else. thanks again.

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

8 posted 2005-05-19 11:14 PM

you're writing always amazes me

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

9 posted 2005-05-29 01:32 AM

thanks again. i really appreciate that people still read my crap.

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