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Everything has an end
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Everything has an end |
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xtel Junior Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 16 |
Everything has an end Whether you want it or not Forever does not exist Yes, I’ve learned this lesson Maybe the hard way But I’ve learned it There are things which Are not meant to be And never will. And the best thing to do Is accept that there are things Which can never be xte| |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Ah...I know that feeling. Well said. "Cut my life into pieces, this is my last resort."~PaPaRoach |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
no.......i refuse to accept that. im nealy happy in my delusional world. maybe |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
ah i know that feeling all too well and it really sucks... good write though... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
a grate Philosopher once said "Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. this poest made me think of this good job and keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem with a lot of truth in it. |
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mindy Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34VA, US |
Assuming that something in my life would sometime end...this poem just reassured me. Thanks for the reality check. |
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xtel Junior Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 16 |
Thanks for the critiques. It really encourage me. |
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