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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2005-02-28 10:38 PM


One short question.
Two little words.
Three huge possibilities.
I want to;
Yet, I can not bring myself to act upon it.
Six months you hated me;
now you changed your mind.
I dont know what to say,
when u ask "Marry Me?"

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1 posted 2005-03-01 12:12 PM


whoa, good poem..weird topic.  eeeep@marriage but yay at your poem..it was simple and strange and i liked it.

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2 posted 2005-03-01 12:26 PM


why did he hate you? I would be very careful about that...I hope you think it over and talk to your folks about it, if this is real of course...I personally don't advise getting married young...live your life for you for a while...
tearsoflove13762
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3 posted 2005-03-01 07:22 PM


thanks both of you but its very complicated... it wont be for a year and a half or two yrs fm now if it happens but i cheated on him and he now says he doesnt wanna live w/ out me... im tryin not to fall in the trap but... i would like to believe him.
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4 posted 2005-03-01 09:25 PM


just please, be careful...you don't have to be engaged in that time, you two are young, take the time to get to know each other...and get to know yourselves...then decide.  (I'm a mom...I can't help it, I worry...)

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