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0 posted 2005-02-16 08:18 PM



For you and I ,
A year was too short,
The time we shared,
And instance in my lifetime,

When we parted,
Who knew-?
It was not meant to be,
My love was false,

Without knowing-
U left me-
One day I was alone,
And scared,

Where did u go?
With my heart in your hands,
And my soul in your breath,
I question you till this day,

How will this world treat me?
When I am denied by the one-
I loved and care for,
Was it innocence that you robbed?
Or my sanity that you stole?

Tears will never flow,
For there is nothing left now,
Just a hole-
Where our heart use to be.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-27 12:09 PM


Wow...I can really relate to this one. Great job.

~Alli~

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2 posted 2005-02-27 03:52 PM



'Tears will never flow,
For there is nothing left now,
Just a hole-
Where our heart use to be.'

Amazing ending.

Blew me away!

-Kelly

You play the song I know.
You are the song I know.

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