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Loving others |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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When you grieve, It is a sign of truth, That you really are sorry, And wish you could undo, But that is not my case, For I was replaced, By someone else, In a matter of days, Where lay the fairness? The promise to be here, Forever in each others arms, To never leave each other, No longer sought was my love, Or my kisses on the cheeks, Just another set of arms to wrap, The thought of me, bleak, My heart burns with fire, And of your lovely desire, In which I indulged, Till I could drown no more, What happen to me was given, For my love was surreal, And that was the prize I pay, For my dreams are vague, Love is a gift from God, We each have it, But we choose to waste it, And use it on ourselves Instead of loving others. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Love is a gift from God, We each have it, But we choose to waste it, And use it on ourselves Instead of loving others." That's so true. Great write, nice to see you posting again!  And you cut your hair!!  lol.Keep Posting!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
Great write. I can defenitely relate to this poem. Awesome job! Meredith ~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~ |
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