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Toasty
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my little hole in wisconsin

0 posted 2005-01-25 10:47 PM



sunlight that cuts like a knife
wishing I lived in my dreams
reality has such a harshness to is
ripping my hopes at the seams
feeling my soul being torn apart
wishing that I'd never wake
if dreams carry the power to heal
life has the power to break

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

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1 posted 2005-01-26 09:54 PM


Wow. Great write. *hugs*
Just thought I'd bump this up the list.

~Alli~

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Jezzika
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2 posted 2005-01-27 10:02 AM


"if dreams carry the power to heal
life has the power to break"  

I loved this part... Great poem..

Jezzika

you know he really wants me

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