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WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

0 posted 2004-11-15 09:34 PM

Is there any use
In saying those three words
If you wont say them back?
I know it'll break my heart
But I can't stop it
These feelings have been kept
For way too long!
And I can't hold them In
So dont say anything
When I say those three words to you
Cuz even if you do, they probably wont be true!

If you don't understand the end it means that if he said "I love you too!" it wouldn't be true- lol Alli. If anyone has other title suggestions, feel free to post!

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

1 posted 2004-11-15 09:45 PM

This is so bad now that I look at it! Lol!!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

2 posted 2004-11-16 05:36 AM

I understand what you mean Bailey
I was going out with this one guy
who always say's "I love you,"
to me I didnt feel the same way
with him so I broke it off because
things might get more serious
ifyou say those 3 words.
Thanks4 sharing !!!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2004-11-16 11:43 AM

yay another poet who writes about love kinda like i do. awesome! i think you should read this a few times tho and see how much more you can add.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

4 posted 2004-11-16 05:39 PM

Is there any use
In saying those three words
If you wont say them back?
I know it'll break my heart
But I can't stop it
These feelings have been kept
For way too long!
And I can't hold them In
So dont say anything...

pretty good this far...

~Express Yourself~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-16 07:47 PM

Bailey! I swear I knew what it meant!! You just typed faster than usual!

Yeah, lol...I already told you it was good even though you didnt think it was..but look, all these people agree with me! So ha! It is good!

~Alli~

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WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

6 posted 2004-11-17 07:12 PM

yeah- I knew that. I was just teasin you cuz its fun! lol.

I know everyones like "good so far!" but I tried to add onto it and nothing more will come from my pen! I sware..... and i really wanna add more. So anyone want to help?!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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