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aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2004-11-11 06:35 AM

to me you are the world
to you i am nothing

i dont know how you feel anymore
and this is killing me inside
you dont know how dead i have become
again.....

i have died without you
and you cant even see that..
you cant see anytything in me
anymore....

you think i have changed
when actually i am exactly the same
as i ever was, i am still the
same.....

to me i am
..... dead.....
to you i am
..... different.....

i dont know what brought this on but hey here it is...... any comments welcome....

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-11-11 12:53 PM

I like this, very descriptive. I like the line, "you don't know how dead I have become." I love the end as well. Good work.
Thanks for sharing.

But Im comforted
by the fact that I can hurt inside
all I want to
without anyone ever knowing
~WinterWren~

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

2 posted 2004-11-11 06:28 PM

this is how i feel right at thsi very moment i couldnt have done it betetr myself thanks for a great read =o) emma x

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-11-11 08:07 PM

Awww sad write!

But still great, none the less!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

earthdust
Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 53
predestined and foreknown

4 posted 2004-11-11 11:48 PM

very sensual...

ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

5 posted 2004-11-12 01:39 AM

Very well done...I liked this read a lot

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

6 posted 2004-11-12 05:06 AM

thankyou all so much for replying to this one.... i odnt really know what provoked me to write this.... thankyu all again...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

7 posted 2004-11-13 08:24 PM

really enjoyed this...

~Express Yourself~

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