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LiL-Jew
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since 2003-10-28
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0 posted 2003-10-28 05:59 PM


It takes time to laugh
It takes time to cry
It takes time to live
To learn to say goodbye.

It takes time to love
It takes time to hate
It takes time to battle
To beat your own fate.

It takes time to struggle
It takes time to forgive
It takes time to suffer
And then it takes time to recieve.

It takes time to live
To learn to say goodbye
I takes time to struggle
To find the reasons why.

It takes time to hate
To learn how to forgive
It takes time to love
To learn how to live.

I wrote this one after a death of a really good friend. Please tell me what you think.


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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-28 07:29 PM


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Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
2 posted 2003-10-29 09:59 AM


The time of everything is what it takes. To make it through the good, the bad, and the ugly. Many sympathies to you and your friend... but as you said it will take time.

       NJS

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2003-10-29 11:58 AM


Good work. ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

frolicking dolphin
Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
4 posted 2003-10-29 03:22 PM


Nice write, it's so true but often it takes so long to realize that it does take time. nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Olive_8
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since 2003-09-20
Posts 41
Canada
5 posted 2003-11-03 11:38 PM


You amaze me!

~*Everything will be ok in the end, and if it is not ok, then it is not the end.~*

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