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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
One so small, one so young, forced to face the world all alone. No one knows, so no one cares, about her silent battle of affairs. Her pain comes often, her blood runs red, her body becomes tired too tired to fight. This one so small, and this one so young, has to be alone has to stay that way. So no one will ever know, about what attacks her when she's alone. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Andi! I'm so glad your posting again..i always love your poems and can always seem to relate. In this poem, I liked this part: "No one knows, so no one cares, about her silent battle of affairs." Idk...this poem kinda reminds me of me in a way. Amazing write like always...   ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
Alli~ You always seem to have great things to say; and I thank you for them. This started as a school project to get some of my poetry out in the open last year, but now I do it because there is always poeple here to relate to. Thank you so much, Andi "We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing" |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
i like this one, short enough, and full of feelings.... just the way i like em! ~Express Yourself~ |
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