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red_angel*16
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0 posted 2004-10-25 05:09 AM



To love you is loose you, and
to loose you is to die
but how could I have ever known
you would say good bye
now i look at the pictures of
all the times we've shared and
now I realize that they are in the past
How can my life go on giving
when my heart is dying
how can my soul go on living
when my eyes are still crying?
the very moment you said goodbye
i tried my hardest not to cry
I wanted to show you that I would be fine
so you will have the courage to say you werent mine
The hardest part will always
be the part of letting go
even though deep in my heart
I know I still love you so...

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1 posted 2004-10-25 09:26 AM


RedAngel~

'The hardest part will always
be the part of letting go'


Oh yes ... it is difficult to let go of the love and yet to retain the beautiful memories~

I wish you well as you handle this moment in your life~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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2 posted 2004-10-25 02:52 PM


Ah Yes, a thing that everyone can relate to honestly. We've all been there and it's hard in fact.

Nice Write.

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3 posted 2004-10-25 05:07 PM


"The hardest part will always
be the part of letting go
even though deep in my heart
I know I still love you so..."


Like branden said, it's something that everyone goes through at one time or another..

There is this quote that i like...its says:
No guy is worth your tears & when you find one that is, he won't make you cry.
Dont worry...you'll eventually move on..just hang in there...


~Alli~

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red_angel*16
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4 posted 2004-10-29 05:13 AM


thank you
you guys I really like it when
someone replys to my poems
and thank you all for being so caring
on this kind of time...


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