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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2004-10-18 12:31 PM


i just wrote this in about 5 minutes and i definately contradict myself, it probably makes no sense either, but hey, i just had to say it.
i came to the conclusion
that i hate people
i hate everyone that lives
that breathes the same air
i breathe everyday
i hate them all
including myself
cant you see
what socitey has done
to me
to you
the the whole world
it has corrupted us
who can live
a true meaningful life
and be true to themselves
and others
when we are living
in society
i tried to back away from it
i tried to live
but living to your own standards
and your own expectations
sometimes isnt good enough
for the rest of the world
they just cant except it
the fact that your different.

theres too much racism
too much sexism
too many people
that just dont care
too many people that hate
others because they arent clones
of themselves
its time we live our own lives
not care what others think
its time to stop judging people
from their hair
or the way they dress
its time were open to others
its time to care
to love
to be yourself
its time we live the truth


~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-18 01:48 AM


Yes, it is a tough world in so many ways. What kind of music do you enjoy? Surround yourself with thoughts of your friends, your favorite color, favorite music, your favorite food, favorite hobby. Then maybe you will see there really are rainbows behind all those clouds. Hugs to you.
young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
2 posted 2004-10-18 08:35 AM


it's interesting how bleak life is to those who have no hope. find truth and you will find hope. find true love, and hatred will pass away. hatred only blooms where love has died and continues to die.
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