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..Fade in on a couple, laying in bed, smiling...
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..Fade in on a couple, laying in bed, smiling... |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket 
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That day we danced in clouds of dust. We were as pure as the songs in our hearts - as the summer we shared apart. I looked at you, in the shadow of a broken heart, and wanted to be near you. And we laugh now, because I had your life in my pocket. That night we lay amidst a shaded bedroom monlogue. As the darkness spoke, you fumbled for excuses to lay your arm around me. And I laugh now, because I would have let you anyway. That night I found love again. And I laughed, because I had been searching in all the wrong places. I believe that lovers should be tied together and thrown into the ocean in the worst of weather and left there to drownin their innocence |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautifully done! You took me there, and let me see it play out....excellent  |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i really liked this, careful of spelling stuff tho. bergundy "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I always enjoy ur poems - this one is no exception. Great job! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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