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Teen Poetry #7

I need you

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-09-21 05:51 AM

I need to feel happiness
I need to feel like I belong
I need to feel loved
Something I havent felt for so long

I need to feel like I'm wanted
like I'm needed in some way
Ineed to feel like someone is there for me
each and every day

But mostly what I need is you
To light up my darkest days
and to help me feel the love
in every little way...

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

1 posted 2004-09-21 03:05 PM

Red Angel this is really good. I understand where you are coming from..Very Nicely done

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2004-09-21 08:08 PM

wow you said in this poem exactly how i felt earlier on this week

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2004-09-21 08:11 PM

Short but sweet. I really love this poem, I can relate to it very well.
Excellent job, thanks for sharing.

WinterWren-
Counting stars wishing I was ok,
Crashing down was my biggest mistake.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-09-21 11:07 PM

Liked this alot! I just wish that it was longer...*sigh*...I feel like it ended too quickly.

And I can relate to this poem just like the other people that replied.
Nice job, can't wait to read more!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

5 posted 2004-09-22 02:35 AM

I really liked this! Very cute! I liked the ending especially! Great Job!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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