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0 posted 2004-09-16 02:50 AM


This is a rough draft of a poem, if you have any suggestions please let me know! Thanks!
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The mirror shatters, with my broken heart
The world is falling, all at once, falling apart
You’ve vanished, gone from my sight
You’ve given up, let go of the fight
There’s no hero in this tale
No ocean here, nowhere to sail
My heart’s on the cutting room floor
But you’re leaving, walking out that door


XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

© Copyright 2004 Serena Marie Corbella - All Rights Reserved
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