Condesending Compulsive Liar

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Teen Poetry #7

Condesending Compulsive Liar

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-09-09 08:33 PM

(a venture into shakespearean sonnets. they are 14 line poems, each line with 10 syllables.it includes three quatrains with eery other line rhyming and one couplet at the end. they are also supposed to be written in iambic pentameter. Comments would be helpful.)

Condesending Compulsive Liar

Steadfast, unbelievably unshaken
dirty slate not cleared anytime prior
state of ignorance always to stay in
condesending compulsive liar
retraction and rehabilitation
commit under a horrible twisted
tounge to stress and pull out of relation
turning your body never to listen
to words that may have saved you life that day
ignoring and staying in disbelief
to difficult to look into your face
of glee when he had caused you so much grief
it will be turned for him to face justice
just as soon as you learn to accept this

nice use of muffin

TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04

Posts 92
PA, USA

1 posted 2004-09-09 10:04 PM

Very creative and well written. You obviously have alot of patience in order to concuct something like so well.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-09-11 07:54 PM

Omg...yes...you must have alot of patience to be able to write this!

Congrats on writing such a wonderful poem...I know I would have never been able to write a poem following these guidelines.

~Alli~

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