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Teen Poetry #7

The Toilet

Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

0 posted 2004-09-08 12:40 PM

Here I am,
Busting my balls
In the lavatory of
This crowded mall.
I bust down the door,
“Get out the way!!”
Hoping that I don’t wet my pants,
I pray.
Belt undone.
Zip unzipped.
The floor is wet where
Someone must’ve slipped.

Ahhhh..

All I can hear is the music
Of the splash.
Good thing I decided
To make a dash.
But something was wrong,
Something was amiss..
What could tamper with this
Moment of bliss?
Then I realised
What was bothering me..
The Toilet sees everything,
Even lil’ me.

I’m ashamed.
No one understands.
The joke of all humanity lies
In my hands.

wllz.on.ice
Junior Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 35
the united kingdom.

1 posted 2004-09-08 05:47 PM

i'm not sure whether to laugh or cringe

i like it

well done

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-09-08 08:04 PM

LMAO

This was brilliant. I was laughing the whole time i read this. I am sooo saving this.

And it cant be THAT little can it? I mean really? lol

This was very...SPECIAL...i like the way you did something different.

Karissa

(chuckling)