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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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Fondue Compliance and correspondance with horrifyingly degrading terms all in a days life completing favors and recieving nothing but a minimal pat on the head Should I roll over now? Play dead? Will i finally get some sort of reward? sickningly sarcastic are you arguements as i request a favor of my own too young as one year seperates mentality from maturity could you repeat you tyrannical logic? was your twisted tongue flapping with no thought behind it's answer? speak but do not listen, have no faith, all a part of you philosophy and plan as you shrug away any logistic and sensible rebuttles and points scream your oppressive statements and shatter my inner ear to rid me of your words and double standards really this is just a rant but if you feel like taking a look and commmenting on this feel free. nice use of muffin |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
do you feel better now? PS.i like the title. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
well this is my kind of poetry!! I loved it, sometimes rants are the best way to impart emotion. I tried to pick a favorite line and I couldn't because I liked them all. Into the library it goes :  :~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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