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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-10-31 08:44 PM

I wrote this last night, just pondering.  It's about somebody that I always seem to have mixed feelings about, but there's always an underlying thought in my mind about us being together someday.  Let me know what you think.

FEELINGS 101

I'm not sure
Why I can say it
   But I can
Every thing I see in you...
   Friendship
   Love
   Beauty
   Future
I say it
   Or think it, I suppose
   But I'd gladly tell you
      (if you asked)
Knowing
   Something's there
   Between us
Hoping
   It can someday be more
We've discussed our futures
And conversed about our dreams
It seems that they could fit
Like a jagged jig-saw puzzle
Cut to perfection
   But disguised
   Hard to recognize
Give it a try
   (try to prove me wrong
    I dare you...)
You feel it too
   Don't you?
   DON'T YOU?!
Don't ignore it
  Please?
You're all I've ever dreamed of
      And all I ever will

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (10-31-2003 08:45 PM).]

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-31 09:17 PM

suuuuuuuuuuuper!!!

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-10-31 09:37 PM

Hmm...I liked the other one better but I liked the emotions in expressed in this one more. It was a very clear cut emotional piece if that makes sense, very easy to understand and relate with what you were talking about. Nicely done, lovely work as usual.
~Live and Luagh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-11-01 05:40 PM

Wow, I really love this poem. Especially the last two lines.
Great job,
thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2003-11-02 07:33 PM

Cody-
This made me cry, not because of what was said, its because I know that your have such an amazingly pure and sweet heart. Your friendship these last two years means a lot to me. I hope this poem becomes your reality.

Love,
Kel

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

Olive_8
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 41
Canada

5 posted 2003-11-03 11:11 PM

Well done!!

*~Shan~*

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