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Looking back at yesterday! :-(
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Looking back at yesterday! :-( |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
Looking back at yesterday , Thoughts and dreams of you being here. All my life i was living alone with no where to go until i met you ,the one who loved and cared about the beauty of life, Nothing in life mattered but the moment we shared love as one... This all changed the night i let you go into the arms of someone unknown.. Like a blind eye seeking for a sight. Not knowing what will happen next, Looking for a way to get back on the road again, To feel the alittle trust of love, Just one more chance to break and More promises that will never be able tO speak our story with the saddest ending, So i have no life on the face of earth because there is No one here to share IT with ,. Like a flower in medow ,there is so many others to be thought of but the only one that sticks out with the greatest smile IS you...!!!!!!!!! I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!! Admit that im right,,! [This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (06-22-2004 10:22 PM).] |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
I had to read it a few times..It was kinda hard for me to understand, but I think I know what you are talking about. Keep it up! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Maybe it's me or maybe it's because it's 1:17 in the morning but I'm just totally confused. There were parts where I could grasp what you were talking about. I just don't see this as one of your greatest poems. ~Alli~ |
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