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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
my pain is tangible i can feel it coarsing sluggishly through my veins sitting heavily in my stomach killing me... i can only cry out with a scream no release! it's still so damn hard to breathe "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
meh okay so i just noticed i spelt 'coursing' wrong, and i feel like a dumbhead. lol if a moderator reads this, could you please fix it? that'd be awesome. thanks. bergundy "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
Very very Very good..the way it is worded is simple enoguh for someone to understand but the pain behind the words are so deep and meaningful that just by reading it someone could feel that same pain and yet enver understand as much as the poet means it to.. be his or her siffering is like no others..like a different world where everythig has lost meaning and we shall never know that world no matter how hard the poets words cry it out Thats how I kinda feel about it. |
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