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Adam Alexander
Junior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 11
Home...

0 posted 2004-06-07 01:37 PM

Alone, chewin on a copper wire,
The sound of a lawnmower in my head.
My childhoods over,
but my adulthood is delayed.
I dont want to go where I'm headed
and I dont want to stay where I am.
A sugared pear candle and an mp3
are all the company I have.
I've drivin everyone else away
with my stupidity and rash decisions.
I blamed you, but you warned me.
Its not your fault anymore.
It was me...

It was...

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2004-06-07 03:58 PM

I liked this...especially the part about the candle and the mp3....well done Alex, but I wish it had a different inspiration...Amor Te.

It's been awhile,since I've seen the way, the candles light your face. It's been a while, but I can still remember just the way you taste! ~StainD

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2004-06-20 02:03 PM

I like this one too... good job

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2004-06-20 04:37 PM

As always you're writing is very intelligent and good. Great work, just try to keep an optimistic outlook on things. I hope to see more of your writing in here. ~Jess

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2004-06-20 08:29 PM

Very powerful, heartfelt piece. I really love this. Especially the lines, "I don't want to go where Im headed, I don't want to stay where I am."
Great job! Hope things look up for you soon.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2004-07-07 05:30 PM

wow, can I ever relate to this
rash decisions...
they feel so good in the moment.
I know that feeling of driving everyone away.
This was greatly expressed.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-07-11 12:02 PM

I can also relate to this poem. You did a GREAT job on it, and I really love it.
If you don't mind, I'm going to put it in my library.

~Alli~

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