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Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

0 posted 2004-05-23 12:20 PM

You don't realize
How much this hurts

Sometimes I wonder if you care
Do you ever stop and take a second stare?

I hate the feeling
of tears welling up in my eyes.
I hate you,
I hate your lies.

You haunt me in my dreams
You haunt me in my wake.
Look at the pain in my eyes,
It's not fake.
Hear my screams,
I want you to know
This feeling never fades.

This is NOT selfish
This is NOt evil
This is not something
I want to feel.

I hate you
I wish we never met
I hate you
I wish we weren't friends
I hate you
I wish we never kissed

I hate you.
I hate you.
I hate you.

I hate you so much
Because this love is unrequited.

I love you
And that love
Will never
Be returned.

I hate you for this.

CeNsOrEd

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-23 01:16 AM

wowwow...this poem was good but at the same time ful fo anger,,,....keep posting see i loved it..love and respect..

peace

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-05-23 10:00 AM

Been there, felt that,,,,funny thing is,,,the fella I felt that way about (some 15 years ago....gads I feel old now!)....is sitting in prison down in Florida,,,,,,,so, I guess I didn't miss too much,,,,lol,,,very good write, your feelings come thru strong

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

3 posted 2004-05-23 11:51 AM

Very good, but also very sad. I can say I have been there before, its not a fun place.
And I can just feel the emotions flowing out of it. Keep it up!!!!

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

4 posted 2004-06-22 07:46 PM

i like it

reminds me of something like i would write
heh
but it's good... i like this

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

5 posted 2004-06-22 08:15 PM

WOw, I got the emotions greatly in this one. I liked your use of words and the rhyming at the spots you used it didn't seem forced, something hard to do. Good job.

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

6 posted 2004-06-25 03:39 AM

You haunt me in my dreams
You haunt me in my wake.

that line is perfect. i broke up with my b/f awhile ago, and i dream about him...it sucks so much, you captured it awesomely though. good luck with your situation. keep posting. i like your critique msg
bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

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