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Halcyon
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since 2003-04-10
Posts 43
Arizona, USA

0 posted 2004-05-18 07:56 PM


There is a special somebody I met one day
Who has affected our lives like no other way.
Always being there smiling and so kind,
The best kind of friend anyone can ever find.

Now this person's memories are set in stone;
Her heartfelt presence will never be alone.
Who do I speak of that these statements hold true?
There is, in this world, one and only-- you.

~-~-~-~-~-~
The closing of my entry on a friend's yearbook.


[This message has been edited by Halcyon (05-19-2004 01:15 AM).]

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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-05-18 08:05 PM


Really cute.
Great job!

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-05-19 06:56 PM


yes, cute poem....

Also, I see your relatively new to passions so welcome!!!

~Alli~

Halcyon
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since 2003-04-10
Posts 43
Arizona, USA
3 posted 2004-05-20 01:35 AM


Thanks.  I'm not really new to Passions, but my posts are far in between.  In any case, the person behind the poem played a tremendous part in my four years of high school, she's the one that kept me going to make it through...

Not to mention that most of my other poems here are about this person  

[This message has been edited by Halcyon (05-20-2004 02:26 AM).]

Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

4 posted 2004-05-22 12:25 PM


It's a cute poem. Loved it.
tapper798
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
5 posted 2004-05-22 11:39 PM


short and cute. good job

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

6 posted 2004-05-23 04:17 PM


its a cut of a poem ,, i feel it


~~~Rommance_Touch~~~
  ~~Not_Ended~~

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