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colifer Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37Ohio |
shoo shoo, the wildberry flows it's bend, not too deep. aye, my lover is sound asleep. the wood, consumed in peace list'n, list'n, the music plays happy growing wilder there, shallow, breath through life the adult saved...the child. 'lo, 'lo, greeting trees rough skin is bark I wish, wish, it wasn't dark welcome...nature's heart. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cole, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Very good writing.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Nice style of writing, I'm sure I haven't encountered this before. I must say I'm impressed and can only critque it as most excellent. NJS |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
im a tree hugger...... |
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