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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I just keep taking it…. Never giving back… Or at least not often enough. My mind is over-flowing right now, And my eyes flood over… Splotchy and red.. I no longer care.. Why should I? No one else does. They just like to complain. Complain about everything I do. More like everything I do wrong. Nothing’s ever right. Nothing’s ever done to THEIR satisfaction. Nothing’s ever completed. Blink….blink…..blink… Goes the cursor… As once again…my mind is blank. It's been awhile,since I've seen the way, the candles light your face. It's been a while, but I can still remember just the way you taste! ~StainD |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Good job,,,,try to makes it better nxt time....the beauty of a poem it express what inside... ~~~Rommance_Touch~~~ ~~Not_Ended~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
dry those eyes Staci. More care than you give yourself credit for and perhaps those that you think don't do a lot more than you realize??? Love ya kiddo.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-12-2004 11:52 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's not easy living with people who always seem to be like great cawing crows, picking at us all the time... either our actions are right, or they aren't. We all know right from wrong... and sometimes, introspection helps. That, or great earplugs. Writing, of course, is a great venting arena... so write on, young lady... and I'll keep watching. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thanks for the comments everyone. It's been awhile,since I've seen the way, the candles light your face. It's been a while, but I can still remember just the way you taste! ~StainD |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 you expressed this very well....hope your days are brighter soon...~~**~~ |
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