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Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
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0 posted 2004-05-12 05:28 AM



I know
Do you see I am a bad guy
Your the worth dream in my life
I hate myself because I love you
I will try over and over to forget you
And
I know it will be difficult to be remove
I will try some day to wake up and see the sun lights without your name be beside
OR
Image you beside
I know its difficult but I will try more and more
I know your nest built in my heart and raised to be a building of love
I will break it
I will remove it
You will be nothing in my life
I know its difficult but I will try against your love
I know I am going to die but no way its the only way
I know someday the sun will be a moon because you will not be beside me
You Are Nothing But I Love You



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Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

1 posted 2004-05-12 09:17 AM


"I know
Do you see I am a bad guy
Your the worth dream in my life
I hate myself because I love you
I will try over and over to forget you"

-You're not a bad guy, just because you love this girl. She loves you too, i'm sure. Don't try to forget her, cause the love you feel for her will never dissapear, and I think, you know that too...

Well, all I can say is this. I loved your poem, it was sad and touching.

-Fleur-

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

2 posted 2004-05-12 11:54 AM


i know fleur and i understand u,,,,but im killing every day cuz i dont see her beside, althoug i feel her everwhere
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