where were you when i was so cold?

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Teen Poetry #7

where were you when i was so cold?

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-10 07:02 PM

Where were you when i was so cold?
where were you when i needed someone to hold?

im so sick of being old.
and im so sick of getting sold..

you sold me in your lies,
like allguys.

DRy and cold with nothing to hold.
like empty fake gold.

but alittle trust to hold.
i tired to show you what i have and for to keep ,
but not to sell me cheap..

but did that work out?
i hate the word love since i met you.
Because you gave yourself a chance to do.

to hurt me in these wishes that never really exist.
but i thank god ,that i never missed.

even though i had my ownlist,
and im sure you got twist,

i dont blame you for being the way you are because what you are is alwayz going to be who you are , no matter what happends your still the same GUY.

Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-10 07:24 PM

I liked it! Great Job!!!

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

2 posted 2004-05-10 08:05 PM

Hello, Sweet yr raining us with yr lovely poems...u have a nobiel love and i hope it be close and soon...The love word is hurt bc we hear it but we afriad to spell it...dont be scared...

Allah Bless You

~~Rommance_Touch~~
~~Not_Ended~~
~~G_w_5~~

tapper798
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

3 posted 2004-05-10 10:08 PM

Very good poem, really strong and it got the point across very well. Again, very good job and keep it up! I like reading your poems!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

Censored
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

4 posted 2004-05-10 10:46 PM

~~i hate the word love since i met you.~~

Ah so true!! Nice poem, keep it up!!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

5 posted 2004-05-10 11:22 PM

oh thank u soo much for ur replies....love and respect..

peace

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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