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Look, Smile, Appointment, then Meeting
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Look, Smile, Appointment, then Meeting |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Look, Smile, Appointment, then Meeting A lovers met on the bridge of the love which inlayed his wall by the hearts of love Pearled on his wall the hearts of lovers and a saccharine arrow to connect the lovers via a heart pumped by the heart arrow We had a look into the river we found a mirror which reflect our hearts which drew on it a pearl gentle saccharine smile gave it the chantess of love. I looked into my lover while she was holding my hands A pearls dropped from her eyes while she is smiling, a dim magic smile She put her hand on my head chew on my face as it's a first meeting for us or a last meeting we will have. The night came down, dropped his breeze and spread aroma. While I was going to start to talk I waked up from my dream and I had hope to be my lover beside me in the time. when we feel by the others and the others afriad to declare their love we have to image how is the love look like |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
Oh... Gosh, this was beautiful... very touching... Loved it!! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
i love this poemm....well i found it kinda like ur other poem about dreaming ,,well i hope you ill find the right one... keep it upp ... peace |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
hi,...sweet_cute_palestinian04...i just put a dreaming to make it sweetie...and to give it a taste and a nice fantsy...i was able not use a last lines about dreaming....beside the meaning here is completely differ than the previous one.... thanks for yr comment ~Rommance_Touch~ ~G_W_5~ |
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