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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
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0 posted 2004-05-07 05:07 PM




What do I do?
I have fallen in love with you.
I know I want this.
But I can’t tell if you do.
I have been hurt one to many times to believe this it true.
Its not that I don’t trust you, its I can’t get rid of this doubt
I know other people say its true, that you love me too.
But I can’t tell if you really do.
I just want to love you with all I have,
I want to be able to believe you when you say you love me too.
I know I love you, and so do you.
I can’t hide it, I don’t want to.
I just want to believe you.
I know you love me too,
I just can’t believe its true,
You really do love me too.



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ConfsdFreek911
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since 2004-05-07
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1 posted 2004-05-07 05:12 PM


I really like your poem, it reminds me of the situation im in right now...i use to feel all alone, but reading your poems and others has shown me that there are other people out there going through the same things...keep up the good work
GlisteningRain
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since 2004-05-06
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The clouds
2 posted 2004-05-07 06:32 PM


Amen.
kissa~rachelle
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nowhere special
3 posted 2004-05-07 06:50 PM


I am glad he loves you too. I know what you mean by the doubt and uncertainty.Amazing write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
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4 posted 2004-05-07 09:16 PM


Awww, Thanks to all of you...for the replys I have gotten on all my work! Thanks so so so much!!!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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Earth
5 posted 2004-05-08 12:18 PM


wow ,wow ,wow,wow..this poem is great ...keep writting

peaceee

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6 posted 2004-05-08 10:13 AM


Beautiful poem. I loved it!
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