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Stepharoo
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0 posted 2004-05-04 10:22 PM



What kind of love would you call the kind that hurts?
The kind that's for another person to whom you can't have?
The kind that's never sorry or regretful?
The kind that has you going in circles?
I dont know, but I do know that I loved you.
And I know that I was going in circles, and I knew I couldnt have you. I wasnt sure if it were real.
But I was never sorry for loving you.
There's just one thing I regret, and that is,
I never told you how I felt.





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1 posted 2004-05-04 10:53 PM


Welcome, I enjoyed your poem! I liked when you described how the kind of love makes you go in circles...I never looked at it that way!
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2 posted 2004-05-04 10:54 PM


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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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3 posted 2004-05-04 11:00 PM


wow wow wow .....soo sweet.......soo cuteee i truly truly truly truly loved it keep posting please lolol..gr88  peace lovezz
Stepharoo
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4 posted 2004-05-04 11:12 PM


Thanks for your comments!
I wrote this poem to my "first love"
And never told him how I felt...so if you love some one tell them how you feel,
cause you might regret it in the future.

Jenabou
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5 posted 2004-05-04 11:32 PM


Never regret hun!
If it's meant to be with this guy you'll get another chance to tell him how you feel...why not send him this poem??....

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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6 posted 2004-05-05 06:46 PM


GREAT JOB!!! I loved it!

Also, welcome to passions!

~Alli~

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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7 posted 2004-05-06 03:26 AM


Wow, was this written from personal experience???

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Fleur
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8 posted 2004-05-06 08:42 AM


Welcome to passions... This was very sweet! It actually was very touching, cause I've been through the same... and I regret it a lot after... Well, but it's a really nice poem!
kissa~rachelle
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9 posted 2004-05-06 04:51 PM


Ahh... i can relate. I can totally relate to this. I liked a guy for a LONG LONG time, and i never told him how i felt, and now he is going out with my best friend, and they really love each other, and i know that even if they were to break up, i could never have him. Very awesome poem.
Kissa_bear.

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10 posted 2004-05-07 12:49 PM


omg kisssa....r u serious???...thats soo bad ,,,,if i was u ,,i would go crazy lolol....this is soo wrong..just hang in there.....and remember NOT TO TELL U BEST FRIEND ...LOL  lovezzz

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ConfsdFreek911
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11 posted 2004-05-07 12:36 PM


I really liked your poem, i'm going through the same thing right now.
loner187
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12 posted 2004-05-07 08:56 PM


Hey, we can all relate to this. At some time or another we'll all regret not telling someone how we felt...yeah, going through this right now. Except, hopefully I won't regret not doing something, because I'm  getting ready to tell this guy how I feel. It's a first for me, and I've liked him for a LONG time. It feels like love, you know? So, I don't want to lose this chance with him because of shyness or whatever. I don't want my best friend to end up going out with him, like what happened to kissa. I want him, so I'm gonna chase after him. Luck, anyone???!!?? hehe

What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about?

Stepharoo
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13 posted 2004-05-07 10:26 PM


Hey I just wanted to say Thanks again!!!
I am really happy I found this website!!!
Thanks

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