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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
hold me tight. dont let go. hold me till i cant breathe , hold me till i bleed. dont let go.. what am i without you? what can i be without you? hold me tight until i start to scream for help.. dont let go hold me tight until i say im through. dont let go.. kiss me on my cheek love me until i cant breathe like me to be your wife. hold me as your little bird before i fly aaway... be with me until i die.. is that a big favor? or is it neVER A CHANCE? just hold me and dont let go . |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a sweet desire, you say it well....hugssss dear...  ~~**~~ |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Wow...I really liked this one. It conveys feelings that alot of people have but you have seemingly expressed them in a personal and unique way. I feel these are the signs of a truly good poet. Then again I may just be getting all teary eyed since I have a personal bias towards poems of love. In any case I liked it and I'm sure the person it's for will feel the same. -"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit" |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Hey Sweet, absolutely lovely write and i agree im a helpless romantic and tears fill my eyes as well when reading these amazing writes of yours. And if you never find that someone ill be there to hold you and never let you go. Your a special girl and definitely going to make a guy beyond happy. Keep up the good work. Hugs, Chris |
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