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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-04-27 12:48 PM



what can you see in these eyes?
what can you see that made you soo kind??

what can you see that made you a great man..
what can you see that made you soo special?

Is it the color of my eyes?
or the colors of the tears i was crying on??

WHAT IS IT YOU WWANT?
what is it you need?
your like the mummy lookingfor the peices of my body to steel..

but its alright there all yours to have and to hold..so dont kill me alive..just kill me so i wont feel the pay ....

do you get it???
or is it i have to make it??

i guess i just have to break it so i wont get feededthe blood of yours and the tears of mine..

...................................
i hope you get it its kind weird...hope wou would like it...

byeszzzzzzzzz

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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2004-04-27 09:33 AM


tis not weird...tis a good piece of literature...and i get it

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

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